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Diana Barry
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Joined: 27 Sep 2006
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Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:44 am |
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The two ladies found Cilla in her flower garden. She was leaning over her roses and touching them tenderly, in a way that made you feel like she was conversing with them.
Cilla was a short, slender young lady. She had wavey, golden hair, dark blue eyes and a pretty rosebud of a mouth. On her head she wore a a big, straw sunhat with a blue ribbon that was tied in a bow at her slender throat. She ware a blue checkered dress which would have looked plain on anyone but her.
I'll type the rest later.  |
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Di
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Joined: 28 Oct 2006
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Location: City of rolling hills
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Mon Nov 27, 2006 8:42 am |
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Starlene
One of Joseph's Race

Joined: 30 Oct 2006
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Mon Nov 27, 2006 9:15 am |
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This is a really good start for chapter four. I already know what I'm going to do with this chapter's illustration... (I've started second picture, btw.)
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raggedyanne
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Joined: 29 Jul 2006
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Mon Nov 27, 2006 3:32 pm |
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Very descriptive, I'm going to keep checking back to read  |
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Diana Barry
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Tue Nov 28, 2006 5:15 am |
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I had to make my self describe something. My writing tends to be ONLY talking. I like describing people better then things......  |
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Di
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Tue Nov 28, 2006 7:49 am |
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raggedyanne
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Tue Nov 28, 2006 5:13 pm |
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I think it's great, the conversations are very funny to read, especially when it's Diana who is talking. |
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