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Diana Barry
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:44 am Reply with quoteBack to top

The two ladies found Cilla in her flower garden. She was leaning over her roses and touching them tenderly, in a way that made you feel like she was conversing with them.
Cilla was a short, slender young lady. She had wavey, golden hair, dark blue eyes and a pretty rosebud of a mouth. On her head she wore a a big, straw sunhat with a blue ribbon that was tied in a bow at her slender throat. She ware a blue checkered dress which would have looked plain on anyone but her.


I'll type the rest later. Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 8:42 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Very Happy
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Starlene
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 9:15 am Reply with quoteBack to top

This is a really good start for chapter four. I already know what I'm going to do with this chapter's illustration... (I've started second picture, btw.)
Can't wait to see more!

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raggedyanne
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 3:32 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Very descriptive, I'm going to keep checking back to read Very Happy

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Diana Barry
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 5:15 am Reply with quoteBack to top

I had to make my self describe something. My writing tends to be ONLY talking. I like describing people better then things...... Laughing

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 7:49 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Laughing
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 5:13 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

I think it's great, the conversations are very funny to read, especially when it's Diana who is talking.

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